Bonjour a tous,

Est ce que quelqu'un qui serait fort en anglais pourrai me corriger mes fautes grammatical et d'orthographe... Je doit le rendre pour demain si possible merci :

I am going to present to you the job of a policeman that I have chosen because, in my opinion, it is a very important job in our daily lives.

To do this, we are going to ask ourselves some questions which are in the plan below:

What is the role of the police officer?

In what place and with what means does he work?

What are the qualities?

What is the diploma, training, and qualification?

How much is his salary and what are the hours?

What are the disadvantages and advantages?

What are the working conditions?

A typical day and my opinion on the job



1/ The role of the police officer :

The police officer enforces the law and regulations. They ensure the surveillance of public or private roads and the well-being of all.

He searches and interprets the authors of break-ins in all types of places

He intervenes for different types of offences: crime, drugs, weapons, murder, brawl, theft and takes care of the interrogation.

2/ Location / means of work

Location: he works in the field, on boats, in planes and in houses.

Means: he can work on foot, bicycle, horseback, car, motorbike.

3/ Qualities:

The police officer must like action and be a team player.

They must be courageous, sporty, patient, curious, discreet, reliable and stable-minded.

4/ Diploma, training and qualification:

To become a police officer, you must pass the ENSP exam. To do so, you must have at least a baccalaureate +3 years, and be between 19 and 35 years old.

Then he will follow an 18 months training in a special school and will be followed by 10 weeks of practice in the police station.

4/ Salary and working hours:

The salary of a policeman is 1754 euro, a little after the minimum wage.

The hours are not marked, a policeman must be available all the time when he is needed. You can be a policeman in the evening or in the morning and you can be asked at any time.



5/ Inconvenience and Advantage :

Inconvenience

Being away from family for long periods of time.

Not having a fixed schedule

The risk of being injured or killed.



Advantages :

Teamwork

Few requirements to return

Learn the city where you are.



Working conditions:

The working conditions are very hard for a policeman, the policeman goes to the field and he is put in danger. He has to fight all the time to keep the peace. He has to work in all weather conditions and has to get dirty to succeed in his missions.

He has to make great physical efforts.

A typical day (by Cédric Dussau, chief of police)

<< I arrive at 10.15am, greet my colleagues. I go to the cloakroom and change, I take my equipment and my uniform. Then I'm ready to go to work. I go to the armoury to collect my weapon and I put it away. I joke with my colleagues and check that everything is going well. I keep an eye on the phone and the radio. When they ring I get ready for my first intervention: a fight in a shop. I take the car with my colleague and intervene.

Everything went well, I got back in the car and intervened on other missions.

After all that I go back to the shop and drink a coffee.

I finish at 9.30 pm and go to the changing room to change.

Tomorrow I start at 5.50am! >>

My opinion :

I like this job very much because it keeps the population safe. It allows us to go out without fear of being in danger. The police risk their lives for us every day, it's very impressive.

Thank you for listening to me

Merci a celui ou celle qui le fera :DDDD


Sagot :

Bonjour :) !

Réponse :

So, in my opinion I think you could write I'm ( you can also write I am ), It's ( you can also write it is ),

I'm going to present to you the job of a policeman. I have chosen him because, in my opinion, it is a very important job in our daily lives.

What's the role of a Police officer ?

Means: he can work on foot, bicycle, horseback, car and motorbike.

To become a police officer, you must pass the ENSP exam. To do so, you will need a baccalaureate +3 years and be between 19 and 35 years old.

The hours are not marked, a policeman must be available at all time.

After all of that I go back to the shop and drink my ( wonderful ) coffee.

I finish at 9.30 pm, and go to the changing room. ( if you go to a changing room it's to change your cloths obv. ) Then the next day I start it all again.

There you go !

BTW, by reading your opinion about a police man just made me change the way I see the world, wow

Thank you very much for inspiring me too.  ; )