Bonjour, je besoin d'un avie sur mon discours en anglais

Je me suis faite passer pour Tommis Smith et je defent le droits des Black People et je voulais juste savoir si se que j'ai écrit a un sens car je suis nul en anglais.

Merci d'avance ​


Bonjour Je Besoin Dun Avie Sur Mon Discours En AnglaisJe Me Suis Faite Passer Pour Tommis Smith Et Je Defent Le Droits Des Black People Et Je Voulais Juste Savo class=

Sagot :

J’ai corrigé tes phrases ✌️

- I did this because I wanted to demonstrate that black people are capable of doing things just like white people.
- That day, I wanted to show to black people that they can do anything.
- I hope that it changes their mentality.
- I did this to show that black people can do something and be successful even though since they were born, they were neglected and nobody believed in them.
- I wanted to show that they can be confident in themselves.

Today, the situation is improving.
I am happy to do this and I am proud of black people who believe in themselves.
These persons who fight for us, the future generation and for our self-confidence are taking part in the evolution of this country.
If there is an act of racism, you can take action and defend yourself.


Il y a quelques fautes d’accords, et des contresens dans tes phrases mais tu as des bonnes idées
Relis bien la correction pour progresser ✌️