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Bonjour j’ai écrite une lettre de motivation et j’aimerais bcp qu’on me corrige s’il vous plaît mercii

Dear mrs kaplan
As a student on lifeguard instructor,ambitions student with great mastery and work capacities.
I would like to apply for your swim job. Because i am eager to discover this ligeguarding job .i like this job . I studied at school how to communicate with children, i have graduated. I really Want to get this job because i love your company.
I’am looking for an opportunity to start my lifeguard career. During my studies i learned to reassure and communicate with children and to be calm.
I’m a capable person and hardworking.i can adress stressful situations appropriately.
I’ m ready to meet any of your program about walking, hiking, and otherwise moving un woods, fields, beaches, and lakes so each staff must be physically able to travel around a large rural environnement and requirement. With my expérience and enthusiasm and motivation, i am confident that i could be a good lifeguard.

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Réponse :

Hey!

Dear mrs kaplan

As a student in lifeguard school, i am an ambitious student with great mastery and work capacities.

I would like to apply for your swim job. Because i am eager to discover this lifeguarding job. I like this job. At school, i studied on how to communicate with children, i have graduated. I would really want to get this job because i love your company.

I am looking for an opportunity to start my lifeguard career. During my studies, i learned to reassure and communicate with children. I also learnt how to keep myself calm, and keep the children under control.

I’m a capable and hardworking person. I can address stressful situations appropriately.

I’m ready to learn about any of your programs about walking, hiking, and otherwise moving in the woods, fields, beaches, and lakes... Each staff must be physically able to venture around a large rural environnement. With my experience, enthusiasm and motivation, i am confident that i could become a good lifeguard.

Explications :

I hope I helped!!!

Réponse :

Dear mrs kaplan,

As a student on lifeguard instructor ambitions student with great mastery and work capacities, I would like to apply for your swim job.

Because i am eager to discover this ligeguarding job .i like this job and I really want to get it because i find your company intriging, and entertaining.

I’am looking for an opportunity to start my lifeguard career. During my studies i learned how to be patient, comfort and communicate with children.

I am a diligent, competent and persevering person. I can show myself serene in any situation including stressful situation.

I’ m ready to meet any of your program about walking, hiking, and otherwise moving un woods, fields, beaches, and lakes so each staff must be physically able to travel around a large rural environnement and requirement. With my expérience and enthusiasm and motivation, i am confident that i could be a good lifeguard.

Explications :

Well i hope you will get your job ^^. If you have any questions feel free to ask

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