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Bonjour, j'ai fais un exercice en anglais ou je devais mettre les verbes au prétérit ou prétérit avec be-ing j'aimerais savoir si quelqu'un avec un bon niveau d'anglais pouvait me corriger?
merci.....




When Harriet was coming back home, she suddenly found her husband who was bleeding to death. She tried to help him but it was too late. She began to run when she saw a tall red-haired suspect who was staying in the garden and who was wearing a cap. While he hid behind a bush, she was going outside but he ran away. While she cried, she rang the police and told them everything. She didn't knew the killer for sure, she never met him before. She wasn't sleeping that night and she never forgot how her darling died.

Sagot :

bonsoir pour moi il faudrait juste enlever le dernier she (celui à côté de never parce que cela fait un peut répétition )mais sinon pour moi le texte est bon dans son intégralité .

voilà j'espère que je n'ai rien oublié concernant les changements sinon bonne soirée à toi

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