Bonjour,
J'ai rendu un devoir en anglais que mon professeur à corrigé je dois le refaire pouvez vous m'aider s'il vous plaît. Je n'arrive pas à comprendre.
MUNDHENKE FLORENT 4°3
En jaune mes remarques.
Pour les questions, relis attentivement le point de grammaire sur les questions au prétérit (= conjugue les verbes que je te donne dans les explications au prétérit à la forme interrogative)
Part 3 : Write a biography

Prepare a short biographical sketch (tâche intermédiaire)

1) Choose one of the following famous American women or find a new one.

Toni Morrison – Michelle Obama – Hilary Clinton – Billie Jean King – Oprah Winfrey – Angelina Jolie

2) Research her life (make complete sentences using preterit) :

Title : Hilary Clinton‘s short biographical sketch.
Date of birth and birthplace : She was birthed 26 october 1947 in Chicago.
Occupation : She occuped a seat of senator from 2001 to 2009. (= son poste actuel)
Education : She studied at Wellesley University.
Professional career (1-2 information if possible) : she was a lawyed diplomate and author. She ran for office in 2000 as a senator.
Remarkable achievement(s) : First lady of united States from 1993 to 2001.(fais une phrase)
Award(s) or honour : She was elected secretary of state of United States on december 1, 2008.
Death (or family) : She did not died.(= donc parle de sa famille)

3) Finally, give your opinion about this woman (2 adjectives and reason you’ve chosen this woman).= suivre l’exemple du 3 « give your opinion » de l’activité « biography ».
Hilary is an intelligent and popular women.

4) Finish your biography with 4 questions your classmates will have to answer.
(Je distribuerai votre biographie à vos camarades qui ,après lecture, devront être capable de répondre aux questions sur la « remarkable woman » que vous avez choisi)

- In which University does she study?
- In which year Hilary Clinton becomes first lady of United States? (erreur de formulation = when / become / first lady?)
- When is Hilary Clinton is running for election to be elected senator? (erreur de formulation = when / run / for senator?)
- What year is she appointed secretary of states of the United States? (erreur de formulation = when / be appointed / secretary…?)
Pouvez vous m'aider s'il vous plait. je vous remerci.

Hillary Clinton was born in Chicago and went on to earn her law degree from Yale University. She married fellow law school graduate Bill Clinton in 1975. She later served as first lady from 1993 to 2001, and then as a U.S. senator from 2001 to 2009. In early 2007, Clinton announced her plans to run for the presidency. During the 2008 Democratic primaries, she conceded the nomination when it became apparent that Barack Obama held a majority of the delegate vote. After winning the national election, Obama appointed Clinton secretary of state. She was sworn in as part of his cabinet in January 2009 and served until 2013. In the spring of 2015, she announced her plans to run again for the U.S. presidency. In 2016, she became the first woman in U.S. history to become the presidential nominee of a major political party. After a polarizing campaign against GOP candidate Donald Trump, Clinton was defeated in the general election that November.

3) Finally, give your opinion about this woman (2 adjectives and reason you’ve chosen this woman).= suivre l’exemple du 3 « give your opinion » de l’activité « biography ».

I chose her because she is impressive : As a young woman, Hillary was active in young Republican groups and campaigned for Republican presidential nominee Barry Goldwater in 1964. She was inspired to work in public service after hearing a speech in Chicago by the Reverend Martin Luther King Jr., and became a Democrat in 1968.

4) Finish your biography with 4 questions your classmates will have to answer.

(Je distribuerai votre biographie à vos camarades qui ,après lecture, devront être capable de répondre aux questions sur la « remarkable woman » que vous avez choisi)

Questions :

1) In wich University did she earn her law degree ?

2) Has Hillary Clinton been elected president?

3) When did Hilary Clinton become the first lady of the United States?

4) What is her hometown ?

PS: j'ai refais l'exercice ;)

clique sur merci si je t'ai aidé !