Bonjour à tous, j'aurais besoins d'aide en Anglais s'il vous plait. j'ai préparé un texte que je dois présenter dans une vidéo mais comme je ne suis pas du tout forte j'aimerais que vous me corrigiez mes erreurs et que vous m'aidiez à rajouter du prétérit, de la voix passive, du futur et des modaux comme can/could, must/may/might, should/ought to, need.

Merci infiniment si vous m'aidez, ce serais super !


Voici le texte :


Hello, so today I’m going to introduce a new technology that is revolutionizing the world. No today I'm not going to talk about drones or clones, today I'm going to talk about connected kitchen robots with artificial intelligence, something that changed my life and that changed the life of many people in this world whole.

In France 87% of French people like to cook, but among the French many people have adapted for a new assistant for their simplified life in the kitchen, this assistant is simply the connected kitchen robot.

However, I'm only going to talk about a connected food processor called Mister Connect kitchen.

But how does this connected object really designed, designed in Germany, produced in China by the brand SilverCrest and marketed by Lidl in France, Germany, Belgium, Switzerland and Great Britain.

Quite simply, Monsieur Cuisine Connect is a cooking robot connected to the Internet by Wi-Fi. It is equipped with a 7-inch connected touch screen which is mainly used to consult recipes and manage cooking. We see that the robot's keyboard and that of Android, an operating system the most used in the world. Like what all its technologies often have a link that unites them.

We could see that on this device there is a microphone and a speaker because when the developers launched Monsieur Cuisine, it was planned that the device could be controlled by voice and possibly by Alexa except they left the microphone but it is completely inactive and it is not possible for us to activate it remotely. But it could cause a disadvantage of hacking the device.

The advantages are that this robot allows us to accomplish a maximum of task which makes our life easier like mixing, mixing, steaming, weighing .., the robot cooker is pleasant to use, very comfortable 7 inch screen, detailed recipes step by step, the capacity of the bowl is good, integrated scale, simplified maintenance, perfect mixing efficiency, silent.

The disadvantages are that the robot occupies a little space on the work surface, the lid fitted with a plug is not necessarily practical to install or remove, quite slow to reach the low temperatures required, Heavy tank and painful to empty when it is full.