Could anyone tell me where I made mistake?


> I really want to carry on this novel, because we do usually identify Geniuses as Science lovers but this novel shows us that there may also such a Genius exist who also loves to let daylight into cruel murderer like a detective, Indeed every Genius has a detective aspect of thinking but not about finding out a murderer in terms of that a think it is an interesting novel it is because of its different recital and I think everything is different in this novel from dogs murder to that boy. the curious Character of Christopher leads him to solve this peculiar felony of that related dog and the book appeals to readers those are as curious as Christopher in the way of finding out the murderer. the unusual thing about Christopher is that he does not understand facial expressions and emotions which are normal for Geniuses.


Sagot :

Réponse :

I really want to carry on this novel, because we do usually identify Geniuses as Science lovers but this novel shows us there may also such a Genius exist who also loves to let daylight into cruel murderer like a detective, Indeed every Genius has a detective aspect of thinking but not about finding out a murderer regarding that a think it is an interesting novel it is because of its different recital, and I think everything is different in this novel from dogs murder to that boy. The curious Character of Christopher leads him to solve this peculiar felony of that related dog and the book appeals to readers those are as curious as Christopher on the way of finding out the murderer. The unusual thing about Christopher is that he does not understand facial expressions and emotions which are normal for Geniuses.

Explications :

For my part I could see some faults but not much, these are the ones that I could modify. The words I changed are in bold.

Have a good day. :)