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En francais :
La 1ere guerre mondiale modifie le regard que porte les artistes sur la guerre, il passe vite fait de l’exaltation à la dénonciation de la violence et de la barbarie

Avant l’art s'était de célébrer le courage, le patriotisme et le sacrifice de soi, au travers de héros illustres comme ceux de l’Iliade et la guerre a inspiré les artistes de tout temps, à travers toutes les périodes. Cette inspiration est aussi due au fait que les œuvres qui traitent de la guerre étaient souvent des commandes, afin de valoriser un gouvernement ou un homme.
Par ailleurs, la guerre éclate en 1914 et Pour cette guerre-ci, les artistes – écrivains, peintres, sculpteurs, musiciens – sont massivement mobilisés, voire s’engagent volontairement, portés par l’élan patriotique. C’est pourquoi nous avons beaucoup d’oeuvres qu’ils peuvent raconter, peindre, dessiner ce qu’ils vivent et ce qu’ils voient, ce qui nous laisse d’authentique témoignage.
Chacun, à sa manière, tente de représenter la brutalité des combats, la douleur des femmes et des enfants livrés à eux-mêmes, la peur face à la mort mais aussi, parfois, une certaine fascination face à cette guerre moderne et totale.

Pour ces hommes, il est nécessaire de témoigner de l’horreur de la guerre. Ceux qui se sont engagés par exaltation patriotique expriment leur désillusion face à l’absurdité et à la cruauté des combats. Ceux qui cherchent à publier leur témoignage durant la guerre, pour leur part, sont confrontés à une censure qui ne souhaite pas voir se répandre un esprit pacifiste et antimilitariste.

En effet, la censure se développe lors de la première guerre mondiale , pour minimiser les pertes et cache ce qui se passe lors des batailles pour éviter des mutineries.

C’est pourquoi, beaucoup d’oeuvres ont été publiés après la guerre et non pendant car c'était censuré.
comme Voyage au bout de la nuit, 1932 Louis-Ferdinand Céline,

Comme oeuvres qui dénonce la brutalité de la guerre il y a The war de SEverini publie en 1914 ou encore beaucoup d’oeuvres d’otto dix tel que La guerre ou autoportrait d’un soldat.

Traduction en anglais :
WWI changes the way artists look at war, it quickly goes from elation to denunciation of violence and barbarism

Before art was to celebrate courage, patriotism and self-sacrifice, through illustrious heroes like those of the Iliad and the war has inspired artists of all times, through all periods. This inspiration is also due to the fact that works that deal with war were often commissions, in order to value a government or a man.
In addition, war broke out in 1914 and For this war, the artists - writers, painters, sculptors, musicians - were massively mobilized, or even voluntarily engaged, carried by the patriotic impulse. This is why we have a lot of works that they can tell, paint, draw what they experience and what they see, which leaves us with authentic testimony.
Each, in their own way, tries to represent the brutality of the fighting, the pain of women and children left to their own devices, the fear of death but also, sometimes, a certain fascination in the face of this modern and total war.

For these men, it is necessary to bear witness to the horror of war. Those engaged in patriotic exaltation express their disillusionment with the absurdity and cruelty of the fighting. Those who seek to publish their testimony during the war, for their part, are faced with censorship which does not wish to see the spread of a pacifist and anti-militarist spirit.

Indeed, censorship developed during the First World War, to minimize losses and hides what happens during battles to avoid mutinies.

This is why, many works were published after the war and not during it because it was censored.
like Voyage au bout de la nuit, 1932 Louis-Ferdinand Céline,

As works which denounce the brutality of the war there is The war of SEverini published in 1914 or still many works of otto ten such as The war or self-portrait of a soldier.

Before, art was used to celebrate courage, patriotism and self-sacrifice through the use of illustrious heroes like those of the Iliad. In fact, war has inspired artists of all times, through all periods. This inspiration is due to the fact that works that deal with war were often commissions, and were used to show in a good light a government or a man.

When war broke out in 1914, the artists - writers, painters, sculptors, musicians - were massively mobilized, and even voluntarily enlisted, as they were carried by the patriotic impulse. This is why we have a lot of works where they tell, paint, draw what they experience and see, which leaves us with authentic testimonies.

Each, in their own way, try to represent the brutality of the fighting, the pain of women and children left to themselves, the fear of death but also, sometimes, a certain fascination in the face of this modern and total war.

For these men, it is necessary to show the horror of war. Those engaged in patriotic exaltation express their disillusionment by mentioning the absurdity and cruelty of the fighting. Those who seek to publish their testimony during the war, for their part, are faced with censorship, as the government does not wish to see the spread of a pacifist and anti-militarist spirit.

Indeed, censorship developped during the First World War, to minimize losses and hide what happened during battles to avoid mutinies.

This is why, many works were published after the war and not while it lasted.

One good example of this is Voyage au bout de la nuit, 1932 Louis-Ferdinand Céline.

Of many works which denounce the brutality of the war, we can mention The war of SEverini published in 1914 or works of otto ten, such as The war or self-portrait of a soldier.