Bonjour, je dois faire un essay sur « Doping and corruption have made sport become uninteresting. Do you agree ?

J’ai déjà fait ça mais là je sèche:

Nowadays, many people think that doping and corruption have plagued sport to the point of
making it uninteresting. For them, athletes have become less and less talented and the
confrontations without interest, the scores being "known" in advance.

First, performances have become artificial. The proliferation and the standardization of synthetic
doping products using has dramatically increased the performances of athletes, who now have
superhuman abilities. However, these new techniques, although artificial, have allowed athletes to
push the human body to its limits, which also has a form of interest, and a natural aspect.

Merci de bien vouloir m’aider.