Bonjour j'ai besoin d'une correction de mon texte d'anglais
je suis un garçon


During my work experience at domatisme, I was fortunate enough to have experienced firsthand and learned of many different sides.The company is specialized in the design and sale, doors, shutters, windows, gates, glass walls and other joinery products.
During my first day in internship, I felt like an employee and not just an intern doing tasks that a company does not want to do. From the first day, The knew how to give me Their confidence by entrusting me with tasks that were part of ther daily routine but also by giving me a certain amount of autonomy.
The atmosphere was exceptional, I was very well integrated from the first day. I was put at ease very quickly because my colleagues were former interns who had no experience when they arrived here.

The main task that was entrusted to me was to create a database from the customer files and then thanks to this database I callded the customers to realize a commercial approach to market a preventive maintenance contract.

So my impression, Firstly, I would like to say that I was getting familiar with my internship, It helped me a lot, because when you are familiar with the company you have a good confidence in yourself and the work is felt. I really enjoyed my 3 weeks of internship


Sagot :

During my work experience at dogmatism, I was fortunate enough to have experienced firsthand and learned of many different sides. The company is specialized in the design and sale, of doors, shutters, windows, gates, glass walls, and other joinery products.

During my first day in the internship, I felt like an employee and not just an intern doing tasks that a company does not want to do. From the first day, They knew how to give me Their confidence by entrusting me with tasks that were part of their daily routine but also by giving me a certain amount of autonomy.

The atmosphere was exceptional, I was very well integrated from the first day. I was put at ease very quickly because my colleagues were former interns who had no experience when they arrived here.

The main task that was entrusted to me was to create a database from the customer files and then thanks to this database I called the customers to realize a commercial approach to market a preventive maintenance contract.

So my impression, Firstly, I would like to say that I was getting familiar with my internship, It helped me a lot because when you are familiar with the company you have good confidence in yourself and the work is felt. I enjoyed a lot these 3 weeks of internship.

J'ai corrigé les quelques fautes mais ça allait dans l'ensemble