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Hello everyone. I'm talking about the new album by French rapper ORELSAN. But first, let's summarize its story. Aurélien Cotentin alias Orelsan was a bourgeois/middle class from Caen, he started music with a low-budget mixtape called "Perdu d'avance" where he tells us about the passion of youth, then success hits him, so he quickly chained with an album entitled "Le chant des sirènes". Six years later, in 2017, he released "the party is over" in which he talks about the end of the Young, and what it is to be an adult. --- TAKE A BREAK --- So, 3 weeks ago, on November 19th, he released his latest album "CIVILIZATION". This is the first album in which he does conscious rap. That is to say the first time he is politically involved. Especially in the song "Manifeste" which tells us more a story than a simple music. He criticizes the lack of discussion between peoples, especially on social media where debates are only opinions without any compromise, therefore nothing can be improved, all debates are doomed to remain as they are now. In another song, he criticizes how society works, such as the fact that our clothes and things are made by poor people all over the world before they are in our hands. In addition, it reveals some ecological problems linked to our privileged lifestyles. I'll explain the flag on the cover of his album. First, blue and red are the colors of France. Second, the green part represents Nature. Then the middle shuriken reminds us of Japanese culture, of which he is a fan. By the way, the name of the first song is a Japanese reference "shonen". Overall, in this new album, we can discover the evolution of the state of mind of a young and cool Orelsan who was known to be an "I don't care" guy. Now 40 years old, Orelsan tries to be a better person for others and for the world and invites his audience to follow him on this path/way.
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