Bonjour j'aurais besoin d'aide pour corriger mon texte si il y a des erreurs et surtout mettre les verbes avec le preterit simple et BE+ing

It was a summer day, I was in my room while my sister was outside on the swings. I was reading a manga when I heard her scream. At first I thought it was a spider or snake. I quickly went outside just to see my cat on top of a man. My sister was facing them, she looked completely terrified.I was so scared by the scene. As soon as I understood what was going on I grabbed my sister and ran into the house with her. I didn’t want to turn around because I was afraid he’d catch me.Once inside the house I told her to go hide in the bathroom. Then I went to take a knife from the kitchen but he was already in the house so I ran to the bathroom and locked it. I tried to comfort my sister who was crying when I heard the door knob move. Since the bathroom was on the ground floor, we escaped through the window and hid at our neighbor's house. When the police arrived they investigated the house and found footprints. However we never found a man.

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Voila ma correction. J'espère que ça t'a aidé :)

ALELOY ALELOY · Answer 2 · 2021-04-09T20:24:20+02:00

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It was a summer day, I was playing on the swing outside. I was reading a man's when I hear my sister scream. I thought that there was a short or snake I took a look and I went down the stairs to come and see my sister. There was my sister in the ground facing a big man my cat was terrified of.i was also terrified by this scene. This man had a very dark face,he seemed very attended. After 19 second I ran to get my sister and I went in the first room of the house that I saw. I thought I should not turn aroundor he would catch me. I put my sister down and told her to give in the bathroom and I went to get a knife in the kitchen but I saw him running along the house. After this, I went into the bathroom and locked us up. I was trying to reassure my sister my sister who was crime when I here the door knob move by itself. As the bathroom was in the ground floor , we escaped through the windows windows and then took refuge with the neighbours. Then, the police arrived, they investigated our house and some footprints were found. He was not a burglar. This strange man was never found.

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Il y avais quelques fautes mais peu. N'oublie pas tout ton texte est au passé d'une tout très verbes conjugués souvent être au past simple ou past continuous