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Sport has real power. It offers the possibility of being in a team, with a bunch of friends or here at the Invictus Games, to share happiness with his military comrades, and that's the most important. Sport offers a multitude of emotions, and strengthens family values. For athletes and for the rest of us, it gives confidence and hope, and they can prove who they are. Sport changes lives, and the most important thing in this competition is to participate and not to win, because the best is to have enjoyed playing with your comrades.

Sport has real power over people young and old alike. It offers the possibility of being in a team, with a bunch of friends or here at the Invictus Games, to share happiness with military comrades. Sport offers a many emotions, is the vehicle of core values of camaderie, effort, pain, success and strong bonds between friends and competitors.

By reaching to one's goal and sometime fail to reach the goal, athletes and amateurs forge new skills of confidence and hope

Sport changes lives, and the most important thing in this competition is participation, demonstrating the utmost of oneself and not necessarily to win, because the best is to have enjoyed playing with your peers and friends.

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