Réponse :
Steve Job life-- Steve Jobs life
I'm would like to talk how didn't the americain Steve Jobs so famous-- I would like to talk about how the american Steve Jobs got so famous
Steve Jobs is got married the March,eighteen nine hundred eighty eleven-- Steve Jobs got married on March the eighteenth, ninteen nintety one
They had three children-- He and his wife had three children
he's fonder-- he's the founder
he always-- he has always
whith-- with (remplacez tous les "whith" que vous aviez mis avec "with")
he had just turned 21 then-- he had just turned 21 at the time
apple consumers-- apple customers
is become so famous-- became so famous one thousand nine hundred eighty-- in nineteen eighty
he become millionaire 25 years-- he became a millionaire at 25 years old
he its inspired of the graphicale-- he has inspired the graphical
he launched apple lisa in on one thousand nine hundred eighty three-- he launched apple lisa in nineteen eighty three
in 1984-- in nineteen eighty four
who marks-- who marked
steve jobs he told he is dying of cancer-- steve jobs died from cancer
he died at his palo alto hom on october 5, 2011 by the age of 56--he died at his palo alto home on October the fifth, twenty eleven at the age of 56
who pay tribute to him in render-- who paid him tribute
for me-- in my opinion
is an example for the whole world-- is a great example to the whole world
he started from scratchs and became chairman of apple-- he started from scratch and became the chairman of apple
his impress me-- he impressed me
all of it's apple products are know until today-- all of his apple products are still known today
has become limited to luxury products-- although the brand has become limited to luxury products
is that the turned-- is that he turned his passion into his job
i think it is he is a hero because he changed the technology every year-- i think that he is a hero because he changed the technology every year
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