Bonjour!!:)))
Pourriez vous m'aidez ,j'ai écris une lettre de motivation en anglais pour un dm,pouvez vous m'indiquer où j'ai fait des fautes et les corriger?
Merci d'avance^^

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in reponse to your job annoncement for the babysitting job.
I am 16 years old and I love children, I have already look after my brother and I want to meet new people and improv my experience in the baby sitter .
I like being in contact and I need money to pay for my studies.
I would be great for the job.

Tank you time and atention

Sincerely

L.N.




Sagot :

Réponse :Your address

City, post code

Date

 

Name of recipient

Job title

Company name

Company address

City, post code

 

(if you know the name of the person to whom you are writing)

Dear Mr/Mrs/Miss name

(if you do not know the person’s name)

Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for the position of (job title) advertised in (where you saw the advertisement).

(if you have little or no experience in this domain)

I have been interested in (domain) since (year) when (describe why you are interested). During my studies of (your area of expertise) I had the opportunity to (list abilities relevant to the job) which will be of use in this position. (if you have worked previously:) I have already had the opportunity to apply them while working as a (previous job title) with (previous employer).

(if you already are experienced in this domain)

During my (number) years as a (previous job title) with (previous employer), I have had the opportunity to (specify one or two key skills or achievements). This experience will allow me to take on new responsibilities with your company rapidly.

The position of (job title) at (company) attracts me because (specify qualities of either the position or the company).

You will find further details of my career in the attached CV. In particular, you will notice (mention another key achievement or interest).

I look forward to hearing from you.

(if you know the name of the person to whom you are writing)

Yours sincerely,

(if you do not know the person’s name)

Yours faithfully,

(signature)

Your name

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