Bonsoir, Pourriez vous m'aider pour cette exercice ( je sais qu'il est un peu long, c'est pourquoi je met 20 points ) et avec des explications si possibles
Consigne : Cédric Lagadec's letter to East Newport Hight School : In his letter, Cédric made mistakes in the -ING forms and in the expressions he used to say what he likes. He also made a few other mistakes. Find at least 12 mistakes and correct them. There are 15 in all ! Coppy the corrected letter.

Hello !
My name is Cédric and I have 16 years . I am in " seconde " In the lycée de Montgeron and I live In Montgeron , who Is a nice bown In the suburb of Paris. I have a brother calling Michel ( 13 ) and a sister calling Aline ( 10 ) . We live in a flat not far on the school . My brither can sleep in my bedroom so my penfriend can have his room. I like play football and tennis and I keen on hard rock. On holidays in Brittany, I like to sall with my family ( my unclehad a boat in Quilberon ).
I also enjoy go to the cinema with my friends. Read is another of my favourite activity ; I enjoy books about sall, books of adventures and science fiction and books about the Second World War. History is my favourite subject at school.
Well, I thing, I have gluen the essential Informations.
I hope I will have a penfriend very soon.

Cédric

I am 16 years old. I am in "second' class at the Montgeron highschool and I live in Montgeron which is a nice town in the suburbs of Paris.

I have a brother called Michel (13) and a sister called Aline (10).

We live in a flat not far from school.

My brother can sleep in my bedroom so my penfriend can have his room.

I like playing football and tennis and I am keen on hard rock.

During (??) holidays in Brittany, I like sailing with my family (my uncle has got a boat in Quiberon).

I also enjoy going to the cinema with my friends. Reading is another of my favourite activity; I enjoys books about sailing, books of adventures and science fiction and books about the Second World War.

History is my favourite subject at school.

Well I think I have given the essential informations .

I hope I will have a penfriend very soon.

Bonne soirée ☺☺☺