Bonjour à tous j'aurais juste besoin d'etre corriger merci !

Tom- Hello !
Bachir- Hello how are you ?
Tom- I’m fine and you ?
Bachir- I’m fine thanks you.
Tom- I wanted to talk to you about the different dangers of social networks.
Bachir- Okay, but why ?
Tom- Because it’s important to know what social networks are for and why.
Bachir- Yes you are right.
Tom- First of all there is cyber-harassment on social networks threats, insults, sending of obscene or shocking photos, rumors…
Bachir- Yeah, there’s a girl in my class who’s being harassed by social media.
Tom- There is also cyber-addiction which is a psychological disorder leading to an obsessive need to use the Internet.
Bachir- I also use the Internet all the time.
Tom- Then there is sexual abuse and steals the digital identity.
Bachir- Yes it is very serious !
Tom- That’s my friend I just wanted to talk to you about these dangers because it’s important.
Bachir- It’s true.
Tom- And don’t forget everything that you broadcast on social networks no longer belongs to you.
Bachir- Yes, I’ll be more careful.
Tom- Bye !
Bachir- Bye and thanks again.