Réponse :
a. The grammar is correct.
b. The spelling is correct.
c. The punctuation is correct.
d. It is the right length.
e. All part of the question are answered.
2. Hi [qui tu veux],
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Bye !
[ton prénom]
Explications :
Je me suis beaucoup appuyée sur le modèle. Tu peux t'en détacher plus, si tu veux ! Ce serait bien.