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bonjour, je suis en classe de 3ème et je voudrais intégrer la section européenne l'année prochaine donc j'ai fait une lettre de motivation, est-ce que vous pouvez me dire si c'est bien ou pas. Merci d'avance là voilà

Dear Sir or Madame,



My name is Tesnim, I'm 13 and a half ,

I am schooled in 3rd year at Jean Moulin college

In Villefranche s / S.

Next year I would like to integrate the second general in European section in English in the Claude Bernard high school.



I chose this section because I love to discover English culture, its history, English dishes and I also like to follow the news of the royal family. I even saw films on Queen Elizabeth 1 and Queen Elizabeth 2. And apart from its cultures etc and concerning my personality English it is one of my passion indeed I like to speak English because it is an international language and for me it is a fashionable language like French and especially his accent is beautiful and I'm a fan forever. And for important things the European section in English suits me because in the future I would like to study mathematical engineering and in this profession we speak a lot English, but also because when I will be of age I would like to go to Canada whether to continue my studies or to go to work.

It is for all these reasons that I chose this section without any hesitation.





Pending your response, please accept my sincere greetings. Thank you.









Tesnim.Chaker

Sagot :

Hello, j'ai corrigé ton texte :

My name is Tesnim, I'm 13 and a half ,

I am schooled in 3rd year at Jean Moulin college

In Villefranche s / S.

Next year I would like to integrate the second general in European section in English in the Claude Bernard high school.

I choose this section because I would love to discover the culture of this language, her history and I would also like to learn more about the royal family. I even saw the films of Queen Elizabeth 1 and Queen Elizabeth 2. And even without the culture of this language, English is one of my passion indeed I like to speak English because it is an international language and for me it is a fashionable language like French and especially the accent is beautiful and I'm a truly fan of this language. And for those importants reasons the European section in English suits me but also because in the future I would like to study mathematical engineering and in this profession we speak a lot English. When I will be major I would like to go to Canada whether to continue my studies or to go to work.

This is why I choose this section without any hesitation.

I look forward to hearing from you soon, thank you in anticipation,

Your faithfully,

Tesnim.Chaker

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