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Bonjour j’ai un exercice à faire en anglais sur une sorte d’enquête policière et vu que je suis nul en anglais j’ai tout tapé sur verso mais je dois y introduire cas/were +be ing et changer des mots pour que c’est adapté à mon niveau. Mais je m’y connais vraiment pas dans ça j’aurais vraiment besoin d’aide s’il vous plaît merci. Voilà le texte fait toutes les modifications possibles:



Policeman 1 the victim is called Elodie, 20 years old, student in a couple, crushed by a last model 2020 red car. In the city of Plaisir in Île de France at 22:00 near his home.
Officer 2 we can see that she died instantly she is bleeding enormously, she had internal bleeding we can see the traces of recent tires and numerous wounds and scar on her rather recent body. the victim had consumed antibiotics that could be fatal.

Testimony Simon: I was at home all day I wanted to spend the evening with Élodie but she refused because she wanted to spend the evening with her neighbor ,her Friends Nouchfauk ( Simon uses a particular tone )
(Nouchfauk goes back to the room to testify in his turn )

Testimony Nouchfauk ,the neighbor and friends:I was waiting for Elodie to spend the evening with her I had prepared a little party because as we are friends .

Interrogation Simon
The policemen:
-Where were you
Simon says:
I was at home
The policemen:
-with whom Simon says: Only my parents had gone out The policemen -when it was the last time you spoke with Elodie Simon says: She had called me to tell me that she would not spend the evening with me at 8pm.The policemen: Why didn’t she want to be with you Simon said: We had fought there The policemen: -A violent argument? Simon says: NO! why (shockingly) The police: -a last question your car is the latest model 2020? Simon says: Yes why The policemen asks Simon to sit down and calls Nouchfauk to question him Policemen: -Or Were you Nouchfauk says: At my place you can ask the guards Policemen
With whom does
Nouchfauk say: My Police Family -when was the last time you spoke to Élodie? Nouchfauk said: At 9:40 she called me to tell me that she was on her way to my house. Simon sat in his chair and ran out the door. Policemen -one last question do you think Simon is in charge? Nouchfauk said: yes Élodie often confide to me apparently he sometimes be violent towards her , Simon was against our friendship and even my one day threatened with death if I continue to be friends with Élodie the most bizarre and that since the crime he no longer has a car. Then the policemen run towards the exit to ask Simon why he returns by bus. Simon says: my car is in the garage Policemen: why
Simon: I had an accident, OOPS! NO! Policemen:Simon Said you are under arrest for the murder of Elodie

Sagot :

Réponse :

Policemen1:The victim is called Elodie,20years old student at Descartes University,she has been hit by a red volvo car,recent model 2020.

Policemen2:She surely died instantly,she was bleeding a lot,we can see the traces of recent tire and she as a lot of scars on her body?.The victim ate dangerous antibiotics with potentially fatal circumstances.

Alibi of Simon:

I was at home all the day,I wanted to spend the evening with Elodie but she wanted to spend the evening with her neighbor,her friend Nouchfauk

(Simon was having a strange tone)(Nouchfauk goes back to the room to tell is alibi)

Alibi of Nouchfauk:

I was wainting for Elodie to spend the evening with her,I prepared a litte party because we were friends.

The policeman:

Where wer you when the murder happen?

Simon:

I was at home.

The policeman:

With who were you?

Simon:

When was the last time you spoke with Elodie.

Simon:

She calLed me to tell that she would not spend the evening with me it was around 8p.m when she called me.

The policemen:

Why didn't she want to be with you?

Simon:

We wer fighting that day.

The policemen:

Any violent argument?

Simon:NO!WHY?

The policemen:

A last question your car is a red Volvo car recent model 2020is it?

Simon:

Yes,Why?

The policemen asks Simon to sit downand calls Nouchafak;

The policemen:

Where were you when the murder happen?

Nouchafak:

At my place you can see my CCTV footage.

The policemen:

With who were you?

Nouchafak:

With my police family.

The policeman:

When was the last time you spoke to Elodie?

Nouchafak:

At 9:40 she called me to tll me that she was on her way to my house.

At this time Simon look around and ran to the door.

The policeman:

Simon is in charge of this murder?

Nouchafak:

In fact yes,Elodie told me sometimes that he was violent with her.Simon was against our friendship and one he even told me to kill me if I continue to be friend with Elodie the most strange think is that since the murder,he doesn't have car.

The policeman run to the exit to askSimon why he returns by bus.

Simon:Because...my car is in garage.

The policemen:Why?

Simon:Because I had an accident.OOPS!NOO!

The policemen:Simon you are under arrest for the murder of Elodie Cooper.

Voilà j'éspère t'avoir pu aidée.