Bonsoir tout le monde nous avions à réaliser une musique en Anglais ou il fallait dénoncer quelque chose, l'écriture de chansons n'est pas un problème en soi... j'aurais apprécié que quelqu'un me corrige mes erreurs de syntaxe et de mots par rapport à la situation quitte à ce que ca supprime les rimes.. en bref rendre l'anglais très propre, merci.

1 Let’s start by giving illuminatis back to Mephisto

1 I would not be a slave, would not be unchained

1 We are Trinity, Morpheus, Oracle and Neo

1 All against the Matrice, this will be bloodstained.

1 They implant Microchips, they take clips of us

1 pretending that is to prevent us of the end

1 like bees they want to box all of us in nests

1 I will not be the same and don’t join this trend

1 Who can believe all has became a trade

1 when you see the free of charge of all this sky stars

1 little brother, no-no longer break the cars

1 now he just do exactly what do his comrade

1 Black Mirror is not fiction nor a lie anymore

1 it’s more like the present with the death outdoor

1 you are geolocated, from the work to the bed

1 I hide my camera phone cause I’m too afraid

1 When I see that in China ,peoples are rated

1 I ask myself If I don’t have to blow off

1 but when I remember that I can wring a spoon without touch it I prefer ask myself if I don’t have rather to blow them off

1 In Texas schoolchildrens became cyborgs

1NFC is a wireless electroencephalogram

1 socials medias allows stranger to know your whole life

1 and If I don’t’ stop denounce the cia will kill my wife

1 Corpses.Rarity.End.As.Mankind

1 C.R.E.A.M get the cables

1 not born under same stars anymore

1 born in same in vitro tanks

1 The End

1 Unchained

1 but no like Django

1 an offer that we couldn’t refused

1 did I miss the train ?

1 did I took the good pill ?

1 did I followed the white rabbit ?

1 did the machines has won ?

1 No ! I’m the one ! I’m Neo, I will Cope

1 I’m the one who have slain Gael the slave knight

1 I will fly until we can see the hope

1 I have maintain and avoid eternal night

1 I will fight the Agent Smith

1 Stop the virus and clear the mist

1 We need to stop what’s going on earth

1 We have to assemble , for us, by us

1 Together we will giving these spys back to Mephisto

1 We would not be slaves, would not be unchained

1 We are Trinity, Morpheus, Oracle and Neo

1 All against the Matrice, this will be bloodstained​


Sagot :

bonjour voici quelques corrections

the matrix

pretending that it is to prevent us from the end

like bees they want to lock us all in nests

who can believe all of this has become a trade

que veut tu dire par when you see the free of charge of all this sky stars

now he just does what his comrades do

que veut tu dire par it’s more like the present with death outdoors

you are geolocated from work to your bed


people are rated

without touching it I prefer to ask myself if I would rather blow them off

social media allows

and if i don’t stop denouncing the cia...

born the same in vitro tanks

we couldn’t refuse

did I take ...

did I follow

did the machines win?

who has slain

until we can see hope

i have maintained and avoided eternal night

i will fight Agent Smith

we will give these spies

we will not be slaves will not be chained

the Matrix