bonjour, qui peut m'aider? je doit faire la biographie d'un survivant du Titanic en anglais et j'ai choisi biographie Millvina, normalement je doit faire 15 a 20lignes sauf que je voudrait juste que vous me montrer 2, 3phrases pour me montrer comment faire :) voila merci a ceux qui m'aideront voici l'énoncé:


ECRIRE LA BIOGRAPHIE D4UN SURVIVANT DU TITANIC.

Ne pas oublier de mentionner les points suivants:
son identité:
nom, lieu et date de naissance, pays natal, membres de la famille, origines…
le voyage:
les raisons, seul ou accompagnée…
la traversée:
les conditions, la classe, les impressions…
le naufrage:
la cause, ses réactions, celles des autres passagers…
le sauvetage:
la vie dans le nouveau monde.
utiliser:
le prétérit, les dates, l'influence exercée sur autrui, le superlatif…
longueur:
de 15 a 20lignes.

voila merci a ceux qui prendront le temps de m'aider et pas de google traduction svp sinon je l'aurait déjà fait ;-;
et voici quelques lignes que j'ai essayer de faire si on pouvait me dire les fautes:
Millvina Dean was born in Branscombe, February 2, 1912
she had a brother, his name was Bertram Vere Dean and parents whose father died during the sinking.
Elizabeth Gladys Dean was the last survivor of the Titanic sinking.


Sagot :

Réponse :

Mr Alfred Fernand OMONT was born on September 25, 1882 in Elbeuf-sur-Seine (Seine-Maritime). Because of his rebellious nature, his father sent him to England for an internship. In 1900, he moved to London where he taught French. Back in Le Havre, he became a cotton dealer. This activity requires him to travel regularly to the United States. On April 10, 1912, Fernand OMONT, aged 29, boarded the Titanic at Cherbourg as a first-class passenger. He could not board earlier as originally planned because of the coal strike in England. He had a single cabin. He became acquainted with two compatriots, Paul CHEVRÉ, a Belgian sculptor, and Pierre MARÉCHAL, a French aviator.  

On the evening of April 14, Fernand OMONT was playing cards (bridge) with them in the Café Parisien when the collision occurred.

“We played until around 11:40 p.m., then there was a shock. From experience the shock was not significant, so I thought it was caused by a wave.” “When we were in the water, we started paddling away from the ship. There were about 22 women on board. My friend, Marshal, was on board, and I did not recognize him until the morning. We were 150 meters from the ship. We saw it sinking slowly”

Alfred Omont died on 18 March 1948, aged 65.

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