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Advertisements arouse our desires. Take the example of pubs for food. After having a Pizza Hut ad we want to eat a pizza, after seeing an ice cream ad we want to eat one. They create reflexes when we shop, they guide our choices. They also influence our views on society, create stereotypes (gender toys, mom in the kitchen, dad in the beautiful car, etc. even if these days it is gradually changing). They send us an image of a society, of a perfect person (beautiful women, strong and muscular men in pubs for beauty, clothes, perfumes, perfect families in pubs for food). In addition, take the example of reality show influencers who advertise via social networks. Many people follow them that it is young adult ... their communities are more easily influenced. Because the influencer will say that the product is good and even sometimes make them believe that they have already tested, this will generate buyers because the person followed has sold a dream on this product, so people will find this product very good, because the person followed the said.​