Bonjour tous le monde, je voudrais savoir si ce que j'ai écris est juste ou non.
Ou si je devrais changer des choses ?
Merci beaucoup.

" I will present my familie code.

I must makes my bed when I wake up, after this, I need eat my breakfast to be in good shape. In addition I eat all the time toast with Nutella.
After eating, I must clear the table however I must clear my plate but I could clear other plates.
during my free times, I must tidy my room, and I may out with my friends.
My parents asked I do my homework and I thinks it's important I work hard.
I need help my mom when she is in difficult.

And that's it .











Sagot :

Ben déjà, "My familie code" je vois pas très bien ce que tu veux dire par là. Et peut-être changer le "I must clear" ;) Voilà.
" I am going to explain my family rules.

I must make my bed up when I wake up and then I need to eat my breakfast in order to be in good shape. I love toast with Nutella.
After eating, I must clear the table up.  I must clean my own plate but I can also clean the whole family plates.
During my free times, I must tide my room and then I may go out out with my friends.
My parents ask me to do my homework and I think it's important. Therefore, I work hard for school.
I need to help my mom when she is in trouble with the daily work to be done.

And that's it !