Sagot :
his invention is important
et moi je mettrait : the must important event during his lifetime has this terrible eartquake at Haiti in 2010.
Et sa parait assez court si c'est un écrit mais par contre si c'est un oral apprend bien ton texte :-)
Steve Jobs was born at San Francisco in California on 24 february 1955. He died 5 otober 2011 at Palo Atlo in California. He was (an) American. Steve Jobs was an engineer and a founder of the brand Apple. His job was to sell Apple products. He has invented Apple brand. His invention is important because he has revolutionized the world. During his lifetime he importante events are: there was a terrible eartquake in 2010 at Haiti. An annecdote of Steve Jobs : Steve Jobs was adopted he had seen his biological father without knowing it before it really encounter.
Je ne suis pas à 100% sûre de ma réponse.