Sagot :
it was a good day, I am so happy because today we made a fire. we had not fired for three days, it was cold .we cook a fish, and we drunk a lemonade, it was very delicious. it was swinging with my friend, and I look the set of sun.
voilà j'ai corrigé ton texte ;)
"we had not " cest plutot "we didn't have "
"it was swing" sa veux rien dire