Bonsoir à vous, j'espère que vous allez bien :svp j'ai besoin d'aide pour rédiger un rapport de détective : je suis un détective je dois émettre des conclusions sur un crime commis il y a quelque temps je dois rédiger un rapport encommençant par rappeler les fait commis dire la versiondes 3 suspects en mentionnent leur alibi et la façon dont ils y ont réagi.En suite je dois terminer par donner mon propre avis, qui je pense être coupable et pourquoi.

d'ici lundi avant 6h sa serais cool de votre pars, merci d'avance à vous!


Sagot :

Réponse :

Last week a crime was commited, or was tried. Someone just about go killed, but I was walking past, and I saw a man, but he had a bag over his face, and I wouldn't be able to recognise him.

I was walking on my daily walk, when I heard a screem, and saw a man raising a sharp knife above someones neck, which the man was holding down whith his strong hand. It was inside a lnoely house, and the windows are gone, so I could see and hear perfectly. I had my niece with me, so she ran to a policeman, and he scared away the criminal, then brought the victim to immediat medical care.

Later that day, one person told me he saw three different men running fast with a bag on their head, or something covering their face. His name is Richard Hanky, and is quite the grumpy, and money thirsty man around here. Anyways, those three men have been brought to the police station to be interviewed. The first man's name is Andrew Willis, and here are some extracts from his interview :

"I have nothing to do with the crime, and I wouldn't need to say anything further. I am a honest man, and that is all I can say for myself. If I die in prison, without it being my fault, I wan't everyone to know that I always was honest, and never lied about something so serious as a crime."

His interview was touching, but we couldn't be convinced.

The next interview by Charles Deck :

"Won't you leave me alone? What have I done? I was in bed at the hospital for eight weeks. I would like to sleep, I need some rest, please leave me alone, I am innocent!"

That man screemed, he was very mad, but it isn't likely that he is the culprit.

The next interview is by the less dare-devil man of the whole country, probably, and his name is Gregory Fetcher :

"Please, don't harm me, I'm innocent, please, I have a wife and children, they can prove my innocense, please, don't hurt me, I haven't done anything! Please!"

And that is how his interview ended, with him crying, only for pity, but I guess it isn't likelty he's the criminel either.

What the policeman, my collegue, thinks about this, is that the culprit is Charles Deck, but I dissaprove, but everyone his own opinion. I don't think either of those three men have anything to do with the crime. But I do think it is ... RICHARD HANKY !!!

I thinks it is him, because he is skinny and strong, and the three men he brought are kind of fat. The man that I saw during the crime was skinny and muscular. Normally, Richard Hanky never wants to help me, he hates me, and he doesn't like doing anything to help other. Why would he help for this?

The interviews seem to be honest ones, I now just need proof that Richard Hanky is the criminal.

Are you asking yourself why he would have done that? Well probably no logical explenation, but he does love money, and the man he tried to assasinate, is an actor in Hollywood ,and is the richest man in New York, his home town.

Those explanations seem to fit together like a puzzle, so, that confirms, I think.

The update on the victim :

He is fine physically, but he's terrified and never want's to go somewhere without me!

Think of that, he must really be deranged, I'm such a pain, I keep talking, and talling stories that are annoying, and I keep repeting myself, but anyways...

THE END