Réponse : Bonjour ton texte est vraiment bien! J'ai juste fait uneou deux modification sur ton texte ( pour évité les répétitions surtout) mais tu peut être fière de toi!
Par exemple pour la 3ème phrase de la ligne 3 :
-He have met my mother after two years in Austria.
Tu pourrais dire,pour éviter la répétion du mot "Austria":
-He have met my mother after two years there.
Pour la phrase:
-We stayed a year in Vienne [...] it's name is Enns.
Tu pourrais dire :
- We stayed a year in Vienne [...] in Austria called Enns.
Voila que deux petite modifications !
Réponse :
My father lefts his home ( original ) country, France, in 1957. He went to Australia ,five years ago for find ( have ) a job.
Hemet my mother after two years in Australia. They worked for the same company.
After two years of relationship, I was born in Vienna, a beautiful city. We stayed 1 year in Vienne then we went to a small town, it's called " Enns ".
We have moved to France when I was six years old. Why ? Because I have accessed to a better education. And my parents started their business, because it's too complicated in Australia.
We fin it easy because I learned ( learnt ) to speak French and Australian since my childhood. My mother also learned ( learnt ) the language. She studied French since 10 years now, she speaksspeaks perfectly.
The last time I went to Australia was 5 years ago and I haven't been back yet. I never speak Australian in France. I used to speak with my grand parents but I no longer see them.
Explications étape par étape:
C'est " Australia '. Tu n'as pas besoin de répéter plusieurs fois " Australia " car on le sait déjà. Et je pense que la langue est " Australian ". Comme ta mère avait aussi appris le Français, tu peux mettre " also " avant le verbe... Mais tu parles déjà bien Anglais, même si il y a des choses à corriger. En tout cas, je te souhaite bonne chance pour le reste de ton apprentissage.