LILIAN74
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Bonjour,
j'ai écris un texte en anglais pour une tâche finale, j'ai inventé une histoire sur mes origines (vraiment tout inventé). Dans celui si je devais utiliser le vocabulaire de la séquence mais aussi du present perfect.
Pouvez-vous corriger les fautes ?
Et poser quelques questions avec lesquelles je pourrais répondre avec les phrases que j'ai faites.
La tâche finale est compliqué :)

My father met my mother during a trip to Austria.
I was born in Austria.
We went to France a year later, I have been in France for 15 years.
I have access to a better education in France.
We fit in easily because I spoke French and Austrian and my mother learned the language.
My mother has studied french for 10 years now, she speak perfectly.
The last time I went to Austria was 5 years ago and I haven't been back yet.
I used to speak Austrian with my grandparents but I no longer see them.

Il doit y avoir de nombreuses fautes mais j'ai fais de mon mieux, si vous avez des idées pour le rendre plus long je suis preneur.
Merci d'avance.​

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KHADIJA1553

Réponse:

My father met my mother on a trip to Austria.

I was born in Austria.

We went to France a year later, I have been in France for 15 years.

I have access to a better education in France.

We integrated easily because I spoke French and Austrian and my mother learned the language.

My mother has been studying French for 10 years now, she speaks perfectly.

The last time I went to Austria was 5 years ago and I haven't been back yet.

I spoke Austrian with my grandparents but I don't see them anymore.

Explications:

je te reviendrai plus tard quand j'aurai quelques idées de questions à te poser.

PS : j'ai un peu corrigé quelques fautes

PRECIOUS621

Explications:

My mother has studied french for 10 years now, she speak perfectly: je te conseille d'enlever le "has studied" et de juste écrire studied. Je te conseille aussi de contracter certains de tes verbes par exemple: I have been in France for 15 years, écrit i've been, ça fera plus naturel ^^