Anglais texte prétérit sur film

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i really like about harry potter
because in harry potter, i saw a lot of wizzard
original and funny ! I like how harry potter
leanrt magie and fates with his friends. Harry,
Hermione and Ron was really fun because
they did a lot of great action and saved life of
other people. The acteurs did a great show
because i felt a lot of emotions like
happiness and sadness. The realisateur did a
good film because it was attractive with the
special effect very realist to make flew the
broom or moved the stairs!


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Coucou, je pense qu’il faudrai que tu mettes ceci:
I really liked Harry Potter because in Harry Potter, I saw a lot of wizards original and funny ! I liked how Harry potter learned magie and fates with his friends. Harry, Hermione and Ron was really fun because they did a lot of great action and saved life of other people. The actors did a great show because I felt a lot of emotions like happiness and sadness. The productor did a good movie because it was attractive with the special effect very realists to make flew the broom or moved the stairs !

Je suis pas sure à 100% mais je pense que c’est ça
i really liked watching the harry potter series because there’s a lot of wizards. I find it pretty original and funny ! I loved how harry potter was learning making magic using hus wand and concocting spells with his friends. Harry, Hermione and Ron were really fun for the way they acted and saved other people’s lives The actors did a really good job in their acting because i felt a lot of emotions like happiness and sadness. The film director also made a very good job in the making of the movies because it was extremely attractive to watch especially because of the realistic special effects that made the characters fly on their brooms or move the stairs.