alexisblanc41
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Boujour j'aimerai savoir si ma présentation de l'artiste Bansky est bonne grammaticalement etc... :
Banksy is a mysterious street artist , banksy is a pseudonyme , his real name and identiy is unidentified.
Well-know since 1993 , the informations we know : Banksy was born on 1974 at United-Kingdom.
He made his debut as an artist at the age of fourteen,
At the beginning of his career, Banksy's work was mostly freehand. It is only in the early 2000s that his use of stencils develops.
Banksy make a buzz and it is very much loved to such an extent In 2007, Banksy won the "Art's Greatest Living Briton" award, of course he didn't go in person to collect his prize.
His artworks a for goal to convey a messages : social injustice ,society's flaws and political.
The most famous artwork is the one of the little girl reaching for a heart-shaped balloon carried by the wind , this artwork a for goal to say : we must keep hope , he wants to raise awareness about the atrocities of war.
Banksy created a universe around him , this universe allows him to deliver his messages with strength, humour and subtlety white a style provocateur.

The sentence : « What happened at Sotheby's is Banksy's greatest work » , my opinion is :
for the first time a torn work is worth much more than some classic works, 2.8 million dollars, his installed a mechanism to tear the painting in two and play a prank everyone , nerverbody will have the original work ,which I think makes the work even more touching .

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ClarkeRaven

Bonjour, j'ai fait quelques changements dans le texte mais sinon tout allait bien. Dit moi si tu as des questions.

Banksy is a mysterious street artist and banksy is a pseudonyme. His real name and identiy is unidentified.

Bansky is well-know since 1993, and here are the informations we know :

- Banksy was born on 1974 in the United-Kingdom.

- He made his debut as an artist at the age of fourteen,

- At the beginning of Bansky's career, his work was mostly done freehand. It is only in the early 2000s that his use of stencils develops.

- Banksy made a buzz and it is loved to such an extent in 2007, that Banksy won the "Art's Greatest Living Briton" award. Of course he didn't go in person (to not reveel his identity) to collect his prize.

- His artworks have for goal to convey a message : social injustice, our society's flaws and an political message.

- His most famous artwork is the one of the little girl reaching for a heart-shaped balloon carried by the wind. This artwork have for goal to say that we must keep hope. He wants to raise awareness about the atrocities of war.

- Banksy created a universe around him, a universe that allows him to deliver his messages with strength, humour and subtlety white a provocative style.

My opinion on the sentence : « What happened at Sotheby's is Banksy's greatest work » is :

For the first time a torn work is worth much more than some classic work. For 2.8 million dollars, he installed a mechanism to tear the painting in two and play a prank on everyone. Nobody will have the original work ,which I think makes the work even more touching .