Bonjour, pour demain j'ai une prise de parole continue. C'est une légende. J'ai écris mon texte que je dois apprendre par coeur. Je voudrais s'il vous plait une correction pour m'empêcher d'apprendre avec des fautes. Je suis en 3e.
Le texte :
A long time ago, lived a king in a castle. He was having a daughter, the princess. The princess was a beautiful woman with long red hair.
But one day, a man came for the princess. He told to the king that he want married with his daughter. The king said that the man should do a mission for win the princess'hand : he should find 4 kids for the king.
As the man was accepting the mission, the princess thought that he never achieve it. So she kept calm. However, the man was really fast, and he found the kids. When he was taking back the children, the princess was horrified. She was scared and she escaped behind the river, in an other country. The man was so sad and he cried for a long moment. That's why, today, next to the river we can hear the crying of this man or maybe it's the noises of the swans.

J'aimerais juste une petite correction s'il vous plait !! Merci beaucoup