Bonsoir, je dois rédiger mon voyage sur la route 66 , j'aimerai que vous me dites si les phrases et tout que jai fait son bonne ! merci d'avaance

 

During last summer, me and my friend have decided to make Route 66. We stopped in the state of Arizona, to overfly the Grand Canyon in delicopter. When we arrive, we take fall eyes is unforghettable . The helicopter offers impressive point of view and unique on the Grand Canyon .

The we have moved by the state of Oklahoma, we stopped in front of the Totem Pole, wich lies at the point 3.5miles east of te road 66. All of the art object are made of stone or concrete, reinforced with steel rebar measuring nine feet diametre. The interior is plaster murals of mountain and lake scenes nt totems-birds .

At the end of Route 66, we arrived at the state of California. We stopped in L.A, we have first visited chic districs of Bel Air and Beverly Hills. After a lunch typically American at Bubba Gumps . We have been in Hollywoog Hills. The next day, we have been on the Venice Beach. Venice Beach, broad and flat, dotted with palm trees and bordered by the promenade and cycling, beacg volleyball, basketball high and of course the famous Muscle Beach.

 

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