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Yesterday, I walked to a spectacle. This was so nice and fun ! I saw a magician and he did a lot of magic tricks. He showed us a sword and he ate it ! I was so nervous because its dangerous ! I watched carefully all of his magic tricks. But someone has apparead and shot, with a pistol, on a card. He moved the card a little and she has no longer had a hole. The first magician leaved, so maybe he showed all of his magic tricks... The second magician hit an empty box, then he covered the box with a red sheet. And when he took off the sheet, a woman has apparead. It was so cool !
Voila ma version :) normalement tous les verbes sont la et j'ai utilisé le prétérit.