bonjour, j'ai un devoir en anglais pour demain et je voudrais savoir si cette phrase est bien au preterit (passé), merci de bien vouloir m'aider

little she was very fan of Wonderwoman, one day she saw her and asked her to become her student, she accepted.
Wonderwoman gave her a hair and told her to eat it.
She got the powers of Wonderwoman.

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