S’il vous plaît plaît j’aimerais savoir si vous pouvez m’aider j’ai écrit mon film d’horreur c’est juste j’arrive pas à mettre des dialogues entre les personnes et mettre minimum 8 modeaux au passé dans le texte voilà l’histoire j’espère que vous pourriez m’aider
Locked up in college Rebeka and I were in total darkness.
We rushed into the dressing room to try to open all the college lights, but before we went in, we saw a figure of a woman, and we heard the sound of a knife being sharpened. We approached quietly and the , we heard a woman talking with someone we don’t know. The conversation was weird, she said :
- Yeah, I’ve been drinking a lot of blood these days, you know I never leave my knife !
There, me and Rebeka had a thrill.
Then all of a sudden my belly
was hungry, the noise it made was very loud! Then, we heard steps that were going to arise, we ran as hard as we could to the room closest to us and we hid behind us we did not know what to do. We heard the sounds of heel approaching and then saw a shadow, it was the lady! She opened the light and I saw her discreetly, her mouth was covered with blood, it was as if she were a cannibal! Luckily she didn’t see us!!! I told Rebeka the physical description of the lady. She told me that in the newspaper, she ha
read that a cannibal woman was running in the city and that she especially loved children, but that the police had never found her !!
We understood that it was her


Sagot :

Bonjour,

Locked up in college Rebeka and I were in total darkness.

We rushed into the dressing room to try to open all the college lights, but before we went in, we saw some thing so i said to her:

- A figure of a woman !

- Wait I heard the sound of a knife being sharpened ! We approached quietly and the , we heard a woman talking :

- Who is she talking to ?

- I don't know.

The conversation was weird, she said :

- Yeah, I’ve been drinking a lot of blood these days, you know I never leave my knife !

There, me and Rebeka had a thrill.

Then all of a sudden my belly

was hungry, the noise it made was very loud! Then, we heard steps that were going to arise, we ran as hard as we could to the room closest to us and we hid behind us we did not know what to do.

- I heard the sounds of heel approaching and then I saw a shadow, it was the lady! Said my friend.

She opened the light and I saw her discreetlyand qi said:

- Be carful !

Her mouth was covered with blood, it was as if she were a cannibal! Luckily she didn’t see us!!! I told some thing to Rebeka like

-The physical description of the lady that in the newspaper.

- IT'S write, a cannibal woman was running in the city and that she especially loved children, but that the police had never found her !!

We understood that it was her