Bonjour j'aurais besoin d'aide pour ma lettre de motivation en anglais, est ce que quelqu'un pourra me dire si c'est correcte?

I am very interested in doing my internship with you. I am currently in college, in the Sainte-Ursule school. Next year I will go to high school Jeanne d'Arc.

In addition, I think I have all the skills required for the internship. Indeed, I am very sociable and I like the contact with people.

Finally, I am very interested in your offer because I would like to work with the elderly

Thank you for your time and consideration.

I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss my candidacy further in an interview and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely, Shyrine