Bonjour, serait-il possible que quelqu'un corrige mon texte ci-dessous ? Merci d'avance.

Object: application for an observation internship in a company (for 9th grade student)

Dear Madam,

I am a 9th grade student in ************** Middle-school in ******, I am 14 years old. I have to do a 5 days business discovery and observation internship. This will allow me to acquire a first professional experience and to get an idea, even to confirm the choice of my future professional orientation.

Several people around me, working at **********, gave me the desire and aroused the curiosity to discover your company. Being interested in the field of navy, technology and human relations, it would be a godsend for me to do this internship. In addition, the site is located not far from my place of residence. It is for those reasons that I am asking your services for the possibility of welcoming me as an intern from ******* the 1st to ******** 5th, 202*.

Serious, voluntary and conscientious, I also think that I am able, at my modest level, to carry out all the tasks that you would entrust me.

I am sure that, this experience will help me to better understand the reality of the workplace.

Also, I am at your disposal for any further information. In the expectation of meeting you, please accept, Madam, the expression of my most respectful feelings.