Bonjour, pour demain j'ai un exposé a faire en anglais mais j'y est passé tellement de temp que je ne vois plus les fautes.
Pouvez vous corriger mes fautes ?
Merci d'avance

[....] and a shirt with a hat and on this hans a weopon. This persons pointed Hulk. In large and in the middle Hulk, is seen to be green but here it is gray, with a torn tank top and a damaged pants. He does not have a shoes. This hair is short and black. In the background, there is a boat, and a rocket. The rocket is white. And the boat is yellow, ans is above the sea.
Above and next to Hulk there are writting above Hulk they are the strangest man of all time, next they are is he man or monster or is he both. To the left i can read fantasy as you like it. Around Hulk there are black lines. The bottom is grey. The title is written in yellow and red. The hand of Hulk is around the little persons. We see that the people around Hulk are terrified. This persons running for run away from Hulk. All leters are in capital. In the top right-hand there is 3 square with in writting in the bottom there is 1 may above i can read MC . Still above i can read approved by the comics code. In the top left-hand corner there is a circle with in writting 12. Above i can read IND. The floor is green with the shadow of persons and Hulk. Behind the persons with the gun there is a white smoke. Around the doctor there is an black auro. hulk don't look mean but he don't look nice no longer.
All the characters is standing. Hulk is big. The all characters is slim. Hulk is muscular. The doctor in this thirtys. The advert is aimed at children also to adults. Hulk is seen to be green but here it is grey. The aim to have put Hulk in the middle, to show its power, putting it in gray makes a pot of contrast with the other people. It reminds me of cartoon style. I am under the impression that they wanted a little erased Hulk by highlighting the characters around.
What i find interresting is that the characters around Hulk even if they are in bright color we seen thel less than Hulk.

Merci d'avance
Bonne fin de week-end

and a shirt with a hat and in his hand a weapon. This person pointed Hulk. In large and in the middle Hulk, seem to be green but he is gray, with a torn tank top and a damaged pants. He does not have shoes. His hair is short and black. In the background, there is a boat, and a rocket. The rocket is white. And the boat is yellow, ans is above the sea.

Above and next to Hulk there is the strangest man of all time, next there are a man or monster or is he both. To the left i can read fantasy as you like it. Around Hulk there are black lines. The bottom is grey. The title is written in yellow and red. The hand of Hulk is around the little persons. We can see that the people around Hulk are terrified. This persons are running away from Hulk. All leters are in capital. In the top right-hand there is 3 squares with writting in the bottom there is 1 may above i can read MC . Still above i can read approved by the comics code. In the top left-hand corner there is a circle with writting 12. Above i can read IND. The floor is green with the shadow of persons and Hulk. Behind the persons with the gun there is white smoke. Around the doctor, there is a black auto. hulk doesn't look mean but he doesn't look nice either.

All the characters are standing. Hulk is big. The characters are slim. Hulk is muscular. The doctor in this thirtys. The advert is aimed at children also to adults. Hulk is seen to be green but here it is grey. The aim to have put Hulk in the middle, to show its power, putting it in gray makes a pot of contrast with the other people. It reminds me of cartoon style. I am under the impression that they wanted a little erased Hulk by highlighting the characters around.

What I find interresting is that the characters around Hulk even if they are in bright color we see them less than Hulk.

Je n'ai pas réussi à tout corriger faute de ne pas tout comprendre ce que tu cherche à dire.

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