Réponse :
I think travelling is important because :
it allows us to discover new horizons and new cultures. some people don't have the same customs as us and I think it is important to discover them to enrich ourselves and to simply get a change of scenery from the country we've always known. in conclusion I think that people who travel are very lucky to be able to breathe different air, to see unknown landscapes and lands.
Explications :
essaye de développer un max et de trouver des exemples et tu verras que ta rédaction se fera toute seul.
bonne continuation :)