Bonsoir,
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Consigne : Je dois raconter ce que j'ai visité (et parler de mes émotions)

I visited the Pentagon Memorial in Virginia (Arlington) is a commemorative monument erected in memory of the 184 people who died as victims in the Pentagon building and those that were part of American Airlines Flight 77 during the September 11, 2001 attacks. To honor the 184 victims, 184 illuminated benches were organized on a landscaped site of 7,800m2. Each bench is engraved with the name of a victim. The benches representing the victims who were inside the Pentagon. I find it very respectful to the victims to pay them tribute. it's impressive to see that there were so many deaths. As far as I know, Tiernach Cassidy, a firefighter paid tribute to these colleagues with a tattoo on his back.


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I visited the Pentagon Memorial in Virginia (Arlington).

Its a commemorative monument that stays in the memory of the 184 people who died as victims in the Pentagon building. There are also 2001 attacks on the eleventh of September. To honor the victims, we organized 184 illuminated benches on a landscaped site of 7,800m2. All of the 184 benches a name of each victims. The benches are representing the victims who died inside the Pentagon. I think that the movement is very respectful to the victims and very impressive to see that there was so many deads..

As far as I know, Tiernach Cassidy, a firefighter paid tribute to these colleagues with a tattoo in his back.

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Hello! j'espere que je t'aurai aidé si oui et bah je suis contente, si non, et bien désoler :/ <3

Bonne soirée!