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Bonjour, je suis en classe de première et ma professeur d'anglais nous a demandé d'écrire un texte pour raconter nos vacances d'été. Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger, je pense qu'il y a plusieurs fautes surtout dans la conjugaison.



At the beginning of the holidays, I have spent a lot of time with my older sister. We went in Nantes, in Atlantis the shopping center. There were many shops and many people. It was a good time in spite of the heat and the mask.

Then, I left at Granville at my Grandparent's house. They lives by the side of beach. That's the reason why I bathed everyday. I love the sea and my favorite moment was when I swam in the huge waves.

Moreover, I have visited many towns with my parents such as Guéret, Limoges, Boussac...

At the end of holidays, my best friend and me, went at treetop adventures park. We had many laugh given that my best friend had never practice this sport.

Overall, my holidays was good despite the confinement. ​

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Hi !

Voilà ton texte corrigé (normalement je n'ai rien oublié) :

At the beginning of the holidays, I have spent a lot of time with my older sister. We went to Nantes, in the Atlantis shopping center. There were many shops and many people. It was a good time despite the fact that we had to wear a mask even though it was very hot outside.

Then, I left Nantes and went to Granville at my grandparent's house. They live by the side of the beach. I bathed everyday, it was really fun. I love the sea and my favorite moment was when I swam in the huge waves.

Moreover, I have visited many towns with my parents such as Guéret, Limoges or Boussac for example.

At the end of the holidays, my best friend and me went at Treetop Adventure Park. We laughed a lot given that my friend had never practice this sport.

Overall, my holidays were really good despite the lockdown. ​

J'espère que j'ai pu t'aider ! Bonne journée :)