Bonjour, je dois faire une lettre de motivation pour être intégrée en classe euro en seconde et j'ai vraiment besoin de quelqu'un pour me corriger la lettre svp, la voici :

Madam, Sir,

I want to be in a European classroom for many reasons that I will explain in this letter.
First, I want to improve my English, notably in the scientific vocabulary (because I wish to be a scientist or a doctor when I’m an adult, that is why biology European classroom can help me a lot).
Then, this opportunity can make me discover a new culture, and I will be more open minded, not to mention the many meetings with other people who are passionate about English as I am. Of course, it’s not the first reason that made me want to be in this special class, but I think the meetings and openness to other cultures can be real assets for my schooling.
Finally, I hope this option will help me to succeed in acquiring the level C1 in the Cambridge test, it would be a real advantage for me. The European mention is also a good certification when I will want to work abroad (in Europe, or maybe further away).
Here is why I wish to join a European class next year, I hope I can be admitted in this class, which I think will open up a lot of doors for my future orientation.
Well cordially


Merci beaucoup d'avance pour votre aide <3