Bonjour, je dois faire une lettre de motivation pour être intégrée en classe euro en seconde et j'ai vraiment besoin de quelqu'un pour me corriger la lettre svp, la voici :

Madam, Sir,

I want to be in a European classroom for many reasons that I will explain in this letter.
First, I want to improve my English, notably in the scientific vocabulary (because I wish to be a scientist or a doctor when I’m an adult, that is why biology European classroom can help me a lot).
Then, this opportunity can make me discover a new culture, and I will be more open minded, not to mention the many meetings with other people who are passionate about English as I am. Of course, it’s not the first reason that made me want to be in this special class, but I think the meetings and openness to other cultures can be real assets for my schooling.
Finally, I hope this option will help me to succeed in acquiring the level C1 in the Cambridge test, it would be a real advantage for me. The European mention is also a good certification when I will want to work abroad (in Europe, or maybe further away).
Here is why I wish to join a European class next year, I hope I can be admitted in this class, which I think will open up a lot of doors for my future orientation.
Well cordially

Merci beaucoup d'avance pour votre aide <3

First of all, I want to improve my English, especially in scientific vocabulary (because I want to be a scientist when I am an adult, that's why biology in European class can help me a lot).

Then, this opportunity can make me discover a new culture, and I will be more open-minded, not to mention the many meetings with other people passionate about English like me. Of course, this is not the first reason that made me want to be in this special class, but I think that meeting and opening up to other cultures can be real assets for my schooling.

Finally, I hope that this option will help me succeed in acquiring level C1 on the Cambridge test, it would be a real advantage for me. The European mention is also a good certification when I wish to work abroad (in Europe, or perhaps further).

This is why I wish to join a European course next year, I hope to be able to be admitted to this course which, I think, will open many doors for my future orientation.

Well cordially.