Bonjour, je dois écrire une histoire d'horreur en anglais. Je l'ai fait mais j'aimerais savoir si il y a des fautes, je pense d'ailleurs qu'il y en a pas mal. Je sais que il y a pas mal de texte a corriger mais j'espère que quelques personnes pourront m'aider. Merci d'avance. Je vous ferais un copier/coller de mon histoire.
Mon histoire:
One summer night, Alex and her mother decided to spend a nignt under the stars. They had seen in the distant a place that seemed pleasant and beautiful. They had set up their tent and they decided to go and see the surroundings. On the trip of a hill was an old church. Alex and her mother didn't pay attention. Once back, it went well. Despite everything Alex felt nervous, as if someone was watching them. Then comes bedtime. But Alex heard strange noises from the church. The noises became louder and louder.
Alex decided to go alone. When she saw the church, she noticed the light. She came closer and terrified saw strange people completely dressed in a white sheet that even covered their heads. Each person had a spider in their hands. Alex had seen somethings about the altar but it was also covered. It looked like a sect. Suddenly all everyone in the church turned to Alex. Panicked Alex decided to hide. The people of the church decided to go in search of Alex. She decided to go and see in the church. She went to the altar and heaved the sheet. And under this sheet was a body of a young girl, surely dead. Alex was scared so she wanted to get out of the church but when she turned around, she saw the same people who were in the church just before.
Alex saw no way out. The sect people started running towards Alex. But suddenly one of the members of the sect got caught in a candlestick and his sheet fell. Alex shocked saw his mother. Then she saw the sacristy and decided to take refuge there. She locked the door. But when she turned around she saw a man. He threatened her with a knife. She understood that he was not part of the sect so she explained to him that she did not want to harm him and that she too was being chased by these people. They tried to find a way out but there were no windows or another door. There was only an old male in the room with objects used for mass in the past. Suddenly, she had the idea to push the trunk. Under the trunk was a hatch. So they decided to open it. It was a secret passage. Members of the sect are trying to open the door. Alex and the man took the secret passage and advanced in the dark. There were strange noises there. But they continued to walk. Alex had seen something in the distance. It was another hatch. They opened it and found themselves in the city. So they decide to go to the police. Alex learned that the body of the girl she had discovered was a girl missing for 3 days.
All members of the sect were put in prison for murder. So Alex found himself alone with his father. But since that day Alex found some strange things in her house like many spiders in her bedroom.