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for me the most important festival of our country is the national party, because it is a party which gathers everyone, it is also a party which takes place in summer therefore it is beautiful and there is sun . But the best is the fireworks, there are lots of color and it's beautiful

to celebrate the national holiday organized a trip to the beach and had a barbecue while waiting for the fireworks, when we got back we were tired, we slept and started again until it was over