Bonjour pouvez-vous vous m’aidez à corrigé ces erreurs s’il vous plaît c’est pour demain ? :

Non respect de la consigne ( Nom, guillemets anglais, comment MLK est mort ! )
Choix du passé ou du présent? Choix des pronoms et déterminants possessifs (je, tu, il … mon, ton, son… erronés, cohérence/logique du dialogue

« What is your job ? »
« My job is a pastor. »

« What are you fought ? »
« I fought for racial segregation in the United States.»

« When did the boycott end? »
« The end is the december 20th 1956.»

« Why the boycott came to an end?
« He ended because segregation in buses was forbidden. »

« How long does the boycott last? »
« He lasts for 381 days. »

« Are you supported in this fight? »
« Yes, by John Kennedy. »

« Where is the place of residence of the king family? »
« The place is in Montgomery, Alabama. »

« You had children? »
« Yes, i had 4 children. »

« What is the date and place of birth? »
« The date and the place is January 15,1939 in Atlanta, Georgia. »

« How did you end your life? »
« I end my life with the beginning of a campaign against the Vietnam War and poverty. »

Sagot :

Réponse :

1) "I work as a pastor."

2)"What did you fight for?"

3)"It ended december 20th 1956."

4)"Why did the boycott come to an end?"

"It ended because segregation in buses was forbitten"

5)"How long did the boycott last?"

"It lasted for 381 days."

6)"Do people help you in this fight?"

"Yes, John Kennedy does."

7)" Where is the place of residence for the residence of the king family?"

"They have a residence in Montgomery, Alabama."

8) "Yes, i have 4 children."

9)" The date of birth is January 15th 1939 and the place was in Atlanta, Georgia."

10) "Why did he end his life?"

"He ended his life because the beginning of the compaign was against the Vietnam War and poverty."

Explications :

J'ai recopier que celle ou il y avait des erreurs d orthographe et de syntaxe.

Pour la 10, j'ai change le sens de la phrase parce que le personnage dont tu parle ne peux pas expliquer pourquoi il c'est tué vu que il est mort ;)