Bonjour j'ai du créer un texte en anglais et ma prof m'a dit qu'il y a des phrases qui non pas de sens et d'autres qui son mal formé. Pouvez vous me corriger mon texte merci.

My name is Amélya, I'm introducing mycelf to be a water slide tester.
I'm flexible, versatile, I have computer knowledge to create blogs about my expériences, I'm approachable and sociable.
I love water and especially sliding on slides.
I'm recognizing the slides that have the most adrenaline and the ones that the most splash.
I have a stable and calm mind, especially for observation.
I have already visited about fifteen water parks.
I have already tested a hundred slides.
I've already done several swimming contests and won the gold medal three times.


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My name is Amélya, I would love to be a water slide tester later.

I'm flexible, versatile, I'm good at creating blogs about what I've experienced in the past. I'm also extrovert and sociable.

I love water and especially sliding on slides.

My favorite slides are the ones that have the most adrenaline and the ones that have the most splash.

My mind is calm and stable, especially concerning observation.

I have already visited about fifteen water parks.

I have already tested in total a hundred slides.

I've already done several swimming contests and won the gold medal three times.