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Last month,my friends and me went to a hotel to spend our holidays.The hotel was very old and it was situated in a deep valley .One night a storm nroke out so we dived under the beds because we were very scared.Then the lights went out and a shadow appeared I was so terrified,I screamed and felt asleep.I don't know what happened after that.The next day Charli and me couldn't sleep,we were too afraid.We were playinf with our toys and all of a sudden we saw a chair moving by her self we completely freaked out nobody was moving the chair.I decided to catch the ghost but I didn't know how to do it.About half an hour later we were still awake.We were very tired.We saw a shadow again and heard creepy noises. We dived under the bed and felt asleep.The next morning we told the whole story to our friends they said that it was impossible and that there is no ghosts in the hotel.When I was alone something opened the window I started to scream but nobody came.The next day we left the hotel and when I was leaving my room I heard a voice who told me "I had fun,you can come again whenever you want,you are welcome".
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Last month, my friends and I went to a hotel to spend our holidays. The hotel was very old and it was situated in a deep valley.One night a storm broke out so we dived under the beds because we were very scared. Then the lights went out and a shadow appeared I was so terrified, I screamed and fell asleep. I don't know what happened after that. The next day Charli and I couldn't sleep, we were too afraid. We were playing with our toys and all of a sudden we saw a chair moving by herself we completely freaked out nobody was moving the chair. I decided to catch the ghost but I didn't know how to do it. About half an hour later we were still awake. We were very tired. We saw a shadow again and heard creepy noises. We dived under the bed and fell asleep. The next morning we told the whole story to our friends, they said that it was impossible and that there is no ghosts in the hotel. When I was alone something, opened the window I started to scream but nobody came. The next day we left the hotel and when I was leaving my room I heard a voice who told me "I had fun, you can come again whenever you want, you are welcome".

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Last month, my friends and I went to a hotel to spend our holidays. The hotel was very old and it was situated in a deep valley.One night a storm broke out so we dived under the beds because we were very scared. Then the lights went out and a shadow appeared I was so terrified, I screamed and fell asleep. I don't know what happened after that. The next day Charlie and I couldn't sleep, we were too afraid. We were playing with our toys and all of a sudden we saw a chair moving by herself we completely freaked out nobody was moving the chair. I decided to catch the ghost but I didn't know how to doit. About half an hour later we were still awake. We were very tired. We saw a shadow again and heard creepy noises. We dived under the bed and fell asleep. The next morning we told the whole story to our friends, they said that it was impossible and that there is no ghosts in the hotel. When I was alone something, opened the window I started to scream but nobody came. The next day we left the hotel and when I was leaving my room I heard a voice who told me "I had fun, you can come again whenever you want, you are welcome".

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