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I am going to talk about a utopian world, a world where we see life in pink .The buildings are feminine in colour, such as pink, violet, etc . The shapes of the buildings are either in shaped of heart or in smiley in good mood, what gives back the joy of life.
Everyone gets along very well, nobody fight.
In this world, it’s always nice the temperature is never less than 15°.
The vehicles are flying to the seventh heaven the where the clothing stores are located, etc.
Since it is very hot the swimming pool is free and the same for fresh drinks like coca-cola, ice cream etc.​

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I'm going to talk about a utopian world, a world where YOU see life in pink. The buildings are feminine in color, such as pink, PURPLE, etc. The shapes of the buildings are either in THE SHAPE of A heart or in a CHEERFUL smiley, WHICH gives back the joy of LIVING. Everyone gets along very well, NO ONE IS FIGHTING. In this world, it's always BEAUTIFUL, the temperature is never LOWER than 15 °. Vehicles FLY to the seventh heaven where clothing stores are located, etc.

AS it is very hot, THE POOL is free and the same IS TRUE for COLD drinks like coca-cola, ice cream, etc.

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