Bonsoir, j’ai un texte noté sur les vanances à écrire au prétérit en anglais. Pouvez vous me le corriger svp? Je suis en 5ème.
Merci en avance et voici le texte:



Last holiday, in the second week, I went to Paris with my polish friend. We visited different monuments and museum (Louvre) and we saw Mona Lisa... On thé Eiffel Tower we saw a famous polish youtuber with your girlfriend, but we weren’t able o take pictures with them. In 20/02/2020 we ate a lot of donuts and angel wings (food), because on Thusday there was the Polish celebration „Fat Thursday”.


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j'aurais mieux dit cela :

In my second week of my last holidays I went to Paris with my polish friend. We visited different monuments and the museum (Louvre) where we saw the Mona Lisa. On the Eiffel tower we saw a famous polish YouTuber with her his girlfriend, but unfortunately we couldn't take pictures with them. After that, in the 20)02/2020 we ate many donuts and angel wings (type of food) because on Thursday, the "Fat Thursday" day was celebrated.